Hw 25

Quinn, I liked your story because I think that you captured the conflict that a lot of people have with trying to be cool but at the same time not trying to seem like a poser. Also I in the begining of your story I liked how you had one of the character's breaking balls because that happens all the time and it seems that might on some level be a mark of coolnes. Also the conversation that you had with the girl about asking her out but then shading away as to not damage your reputation I think is true of a lot of people. Great work!